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   "How long ago have you lost them?"  she finally responded.
   This sudden question took Janeway aback, but then it clicked.  "We noticed there was a fluctuating temporal variance in--"
   "How long?"  the other woman pressed, completely serious.
   With a blink, Janeway let her know:  "Nine days."
   ... "Your 'day' is a single rotation of your homeworld on its axis?"  she queried solemnly.
   "Yes,"  Janeway answered, feeling a cool dread at the captain's question, and watching her calculate it briefly, almost unwillingly as her eyes turned askance, then closed.  "Captain Havetsi?"
 

Set in an alternate universe shortly before season 2's "Alliances," the tale begins with the disappearance of an away team. 

Following them through a temporally unstable plasma field only to meet a friendly and ancient culture, Janeway's worst fears are proven, plus some. Her crewpeople had indeed perished--during a war to free that region of space, and over a century ago.

Feeling Voyager's loss and beholden to her promises, a dying elder who had been close to the survivors of the shuttle asks to share her memories of the people who made a great impact on her society and region.  But is that all she desires to repay?

Chapter 1:  Desalia Rising Chapter 6:  World Weaving
Chapter 2:  Acquainting Opposition Chapter 7:  Indeterminate Movements
Chapter 3:  Appraisals Chapter 8:  Stems
Chapter 4:  Cezian Ascension Chapter 9:  The Ingress
Chapter 5:  Parameters Chapter 10:  Aspects
Rated R for language, violence, mature themes/imagery and sexual situations.

One of my betas suggested I share a few of my notes, so I've provided a few below.
(NOTE: These pages may spoil the reader--only the maps are safe)

2-D Map of Irllae Terms of Irllae (with pronunciations)
Map of Azlre Character Lists
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  1st Place, ASC Awards for Best P/T Story, 2000
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My everlasting thanks to my dedicated and uber-patient beta readers, Annie M. and Susan D., who faithfully bore through my drafts as I wrote them, and gave me worlds of advice I could not have finished without.  Also, to Ann M., PJ in NH and Tracy S., who bravely set about looking through the chapters for glitches while I edited.

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 ©  D'Alaire M. 1998 - 2010